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Describe the place in your life that is the most beautiful, meaningful, significant to you. 

Place of choosing is the Wetlands in Huntington Beach CA. It contains a view of the best sunsets, it’s near the beach. Being here reminds me of spending time with my family. It offers quiet and comfort. It’s soothing to sit there and listen to the birds. They have a trial you can hike. Whenever I feel overwhelmed it is the place I like to retreat to. I am a high schooler taking college English so the essay should reflect that please.