PLEASE REVIEW MY FEEDBACK FOR YOUR ROUGH DRAFT BEFORE YOU SUBMIT YOUR FINAL DRAFT OF YOUR RESEARCH PAPER AND MAKE the appropriate amendments.
Please upload your informative research paper final draft here. Your paper should focus on ONE technological advancement OR current issue in your field of study. The paper must be 3-5 pages in APA format. Do not use first person pronouns (i.e. I, we, my, our,etc.)
You must use sources from the library databases or google scholar. Make sure you cite all your sources and include a reference page at the end of your paper.
Below are general feedback and guidelines based on pervasive issues witnessed while reviewing papers:
The thesis statement must be stated at the end of the introduction. The thesis is presented as one sentence after your background information. Ex. Genetically engineered foods allow mass production, promotes preservation, and increases safety protocols for the distribution and consumption of food products.
The supporting paragraphs must have research – based evidence (i.e. expert opinions, case studies, statistical data, etc.)
You must cite sources in APA in the paper. After inserting a quote, you must include a parenthetical citation with the author’s last name and year of publication.
THESIS – Achieve financial literacy is very important in the present days. It can help individuals make informed decisions, avoid unnecessary debt, and reach financial stability. – it needs to be written exactly like this at the end of introduction paragraph
feedback from professor about my draft- Overall, you must revise your thesis, add more research-based evidence (facts, statistics, case studies, expert opinions, and examples).Therefore, you must conduct more research.
The research needs to be done thru LIRN database
Please take a look at the files, there are several important information to complete the paper.
You will need to make a lot of adjustments on the draft since the grade was poor.